I've thoroughly enjoyed reading your opening paragraphs for the next part of the Mercedes story!
All she could hear were the little taps coming from the elves trying to get out of their ice cages... Ebony
The ice glistened and shone in her face as the damp trees shivered. Jenny
Falcon hauled the unconscious body over his shoulder, nearly tripping on its long golden hair. George
When Mercedes woke up, her mouth hung in devastation. Jake
Suddenly, her face became pale and her gorgeous, golden hair became lank. Alice
Mercedes was hanging over a Titanic sized volcano, which was hissing like a snake and spitting lava a million feet into the air. Declan
The life of Elluel was drowned in ice. Shannon
Although the cold queen elf didn't feel so powerful, the feeling of love for her people made her strong in a way the Black Mage would never understand and definitely never experience. Jessica
Slowly, she opened her eyes and all she saw were shells of people's former selves, trapped in blocks of crystal ice. Daniel
Suddenly, she remembered the fight as if it were yesterday- although it was years ago- and was determined to get her people back. Jade
It had been over one hundred years since Mercedes had talked, breathed and walked. Ellis
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