Showing posts with label Literacy. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Literacy. Show all posts
Friday, 15 June 2012
Achiever of the Week!
I've been so impressed with the effort Corey has been putting into his presentation and handwriting that he is our achiever of the week! Well done Corey.
Sunday, 27 May 2012
Saturday, 17 March 2012
Our amazing writing!
Wow 5/6D!
I've thoroughly enjoyed reading your opening paragraphs for the next part of the Mercedes story!
Here's a selection of my favourite sentences...
All she could hear were the little taps coming from the elves trying to get out of their ice cages... Ebony
The ice glistened and shone in her face as the damp trees shivered. Jenny
Falcon hauled the unconscious body over his shoulder, nearly tripping on its long golden hair. George
When Mercedes woke up, her mouth hung in devastation. Jake
Suddenly, her face became pale and her gorgeous, golden hair became lank. Alice
Mercedes was hanging over a Titanic sized volcano, which was hissing like a snake and spitting lava a million feet into the air. Declan
The life of Elluel was drowned in ice. Shannon
Although the cold queen elf didn't feel so powerful, the feeling of love for her people made her strong in a way the Black Mage would never understand and definitely never experience. Jessica
Slowly, she opened her eyes and all she saw were shells of people's former selves, trapped in blocks of crystal ice. Daniel
Suddenly, she remembered the fight as if it were yesterday- although it was years ago- and was determined to get her people back. Jade
It had been over one hundred years since Mercedes had talked, breathed and walked. Ellis
I've thoroughly enjoyed reading your opening paragraphs for the next part of the Mercedes story!
All she could hear were the little taps coming from the elves trying to get out of their ice cages... Ebony
The ice glistened and shone in her face as the damp trees shivered. Jenny
Falcon hauled the unconscious body over his shoulder, nearly tripping on its long golden hair. George
When Mercedes woke up, her mouth hung in devastation. Jake
Suddenly, her face became pale and her gorgeous, golden hair became lank. Alice
Mercedes was hanging over a Titanic sized volcano, which was hissing like a snake and spitting lava a million feet into the air. Declan
The life of Elluel was drowned in ice. Shannon
Although the cold queen elf didn't feel so powerful, the feeling of love for her people made her strong in a way the Black Mage would never understand and definitely never experience. Jessica
Slowly, she opened her eyes and all she saw were shells of people's former selves, trapped in blocks of crystal ice. Daniel
Suddenly, she remembered the fight as if it were yesterday- although it was years ago- and was determined to get her people back. Jade
It had been over one hundred years since Mercedes had talked, breathed and walked. Ellis
Friday, 18 February 2011
Jessica and Emily Mother's Revenge...
This week in year 5/6 we have been learning about Beowulf and creating what we call Mother's Revenge. We went on Kar2ouche or we could have been on Comic Life. We both decided to make a comic on Comic Life and this is what it looks like...
Ellie B and Sara Mother's Revenge.
This week in year 5/6 we have been learning about myths and legends,and Beowulf is a legend that we have been learning about. We had a choice to use Comic life or
Kar2ouche and we chose to do a comic on Comic Life. What we had to do is write the next part of the story 'A Mother`s Revenge`.This is what it looks like...
By Ellie B and Sara
Beowulf Christopher, Thomas and Mason!
In Literacy we have been learning about the legend of Beowulf and we made a Comic Life comic or Kar2ouche. Here is a part of our work. We did it separate, Christopher did it on his own and Thomas and Mason did it together. Christopher's is on the right, Thomas and Mason's is on the left.
We did it about the playscript that we write about 'A Mother's Revenge'.
Tuesday, 12 October 2010
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